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(NEW) Takedown Part Six – Showdown with the Reptile (7 pages)

TAKDOWN – PART SIX.
Here is the latest installment of Takedown, part six, Issue Six of Oberon Destroyers. It feels like I have been writing and designing this for three years, becasue I have. You can catch up on the story here on the page collecting all the chapters.

This is the final showdown. After this, there is one more chapter (seven) and one epilogue. Then I move on to Issue Seven, that gathers the entire team in once place.

Enjoy,

Brian

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(NEW) OBERON DESTROYERS – TAKEDOWN: PART 2 of 12, FOUR PAGES.

OBERON DESTROYERS: TAKE DOWN – PART 2 of 12 FOUR PAGES. Introduces Daisuke, the Ninja’s brother. I would finish it tonight, but I have had a fever for three weeks, so focus is difficult. I am flabbergasted I completed this much. I couldn’t fit Japanese and English onto the same page, so I prepared a short English script of people needing a translation.

enjoy

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ENGLISH SUBTITLES FOR PAGE ONE AND TWO ABOVE-

Ugamoto Family Jet
Private Air Field, Alaska, 100 miles from Enemy base.
T-Minus 2 weeks to Bomb Clock

Daisuke (Ninja’s younger brother)
RPG will be ready to fly, but can you skate this fast?

Ninja (in the shadows, standing by projector)
I think so.

Daisuke
Yeah but the Olympic record for 500 meters is 35 seconds. Are you that fast?

Ninja
Yes. I’ve been training on skates for 6 months as a part of regular mission training.

Daisuke
And?

Ninja
You pants are falling down.

Daisuke
Yeah yeah yeah, already an old man at 33, huh?

Ninja
Shut up. I broke the speed skating record last month, though in secret. I’ll be fine. How’s the hack going of the enemy’s IT?

Daisuke
It’s going. The enemy’s IT admin and software vendors are all very inattentive, lazy types. There’s tons of backdoors to exploit.

Ninja
Last year, a sabotage team of agents working for us became the enemy’s software vendor. They actually renewed their contract with the client for one more year.

Daisuke
Oh you are sneaky, big brother. On Game Day, I’ll be taking down the enemy’s IT system by remote. I even have Stuxnet from the NSA.

Ninja
How did that happen?

Daisuke
I went to school with a guy who’s now an IT manager for Japan’s Self Defense Force HQ. He think’s we’re “Anonymous.”

Ninja
Careful! Don’t bring the heat. What if he talks?

Daisuke
No worries. Everything was done according to Ugamoto Spy Protocols. He knows nothing. He thinks I’m another classmate. Besides, I had to get creative. You only gave me two weeks.

Ninja
We’ll, I’ve been busy. Sacramento and Oberon business eats all my time recently. What are you doing after this?

Daisuke
Mom (the pilot) wants to go whale watching off Alaska’s coast. Are you infiltrating the enemy base one more time before the day we turn on the Bomb Clock?

Ninja
Yeah. In an hour I’m jumping from 4000 feet into the Enemy Base Zone, and going in one more time before we take them down.

MOM
Hey you kids, I have hot tea. Shall I heat up some curry rice too?

Daisuke
Ye——-s!

Ninja
Ye——-s!


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