Document Dump One – Story Guide for Oberon Destroyers (one page)


Oberon Destroyers, in three acts, © Brian McNally (see Legal page).



ACT ONE: Trouble on the Horizon

Issue One
Enter: Three Heroes (63 pages)
Provides an extended look into the lives of the Quiet Ninja, Joey/Aomra, and Prince Crow, as they prepare to join the team formed by D.Ops Clark Savage of the Office of Naval Intelligence. Goes from girlfriend issues to demon hunting, and what happens when a visitor from another world becomes homeless in our mean streets. 


Issue Two
JUMP TEST: The Private Life of Joey O’Toole (25 pages)

The full story on Joey’s secret job involving a mysterious, ancient, humanoid vehicle that dropped from outer space.  Two words: “weird interface.” How does Joey do it? A story of courage. And an ordinary everyman who has all the power in his hands.

What I'm Working On Now.
Issue Three 

Secret History of Ninja (part 2):

“Until I Understand Right and Wrong in my Own Heart.” (23 pages)
It isn’t being Japan’s Greatest Ninja – an origin tale. Tells the story of his greatest darkness, when a personal slump threatened to upend everything our hero has been working to achieve. Guest starring Japan’s greatest rock artist, in a journey to find one’s authentic self, on  a beach at night in Kamakura. Shonan at night with a Bosatsu of Rock and Roll.


Issue Four
Meeting of Evil Doers (23 pages)
The enemy meets in a submarine to assess the threat of these new Oberon Destroyer kids. Ha! They cover the banality of evil, act like corrupt douchebags, go off topic, and interrupt each other. Apparently, it’s a comedy. Go Figure! The real threat hides behind Chairman Paw, so Beware the Black Curtain! Warning: Contains humor, unnecessary violence, and egregious douchebags.


Issue Five
Take Down (ALL ACTION ISSUE) (40 pages)

Can one ninja destroy a large, enemy base in Alaska, all by himself?  Watch how he does it as the Quiet Ninja goes to work. Bonus – Ninja finally calls home to the family in Shimane, and secrets are revealed as another veil is pulled back. “Oh that sister, blah blah blah!”

Issue Six
Meeting at Midnight (30 pages)

Finally the team comes together to meet for the first time, all three in one room – The Quiet Ninja simmering, Joey snarking, and Prince Crow trying to be invisible without that particular power set – Quips Ahoy! It’s a Team Book! Meanwhile back in the submarine, the enemy plans their first strike – the Siege of Sacramento looms in Act Two. In the epilogue, we also learn the true face of the Quiet Ninja, lost in the fine print, but a big surprise nonetheless.


Seige of Sacramento  – ALL BIG ACTION, 5 ISSUES
The Oberon Destroyer team, all three, swing into coordinated action to stop a attack on Sacramento that threatens to burn the city down, and the clock is ticking. The enemy weapon revealed. Thugs with supernatural powers. Agents of the Martian Horde and their long range Martian bomber. All action issues in one big story.

High School Grrrrrrl Daze (ALL High School ISSUE)
The enemy posts extremely private information on Joey and Ninja in a very public place on the Internet. Outed? Flashbacks to those old school daze ensue, from Sacramento, California to Ugamachi HIgh, Shimane, Japan. Will the team survive this dirty sneak attack by the enemy, and the scars they still carry from childhood?

Story © Brian McNally, all rights reserved, registered and archived with the Writers Guild of America (w).


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